It's a Kite|追风筝的少女


追风筝的少女

提示

  请根据以下三张连环图画的内容,以 "One summer afternoon, Grace was on her way home..." 开头,写一篇约 120 个单词的文章,描述图中主角所经历的事件,并提供合理的解释与结局。


写作小栈

1. 看图作文在于描述图片的内容,也就是图中人物(包括脸部表情、情绪、穿着、人物互动等)、时间、地点和事件等信息的细节串连起来描写或叙述,一般会以下列两种方式来呈现:

*描述文(description)→根据提示或自己为图中的主角命名,以第三人称的观点来描述或解读图片的内容。

*叙述文(narration)→笔者本身融入图中其中一个角色,用第一人称的观点来叙述故事情节。


2. 不管采取描述文或叙述文,都记得运用想象力和逻辑思考先构思出一个合理的剧情,亦即重点分明,有开头、发展、结尾,以求故事情节前后连贯。


3. 善用转折语来串连每张图之间的关系或发展,方能写出流畅的看图说故事,而非天马行空的跳跃式描述或叙述。再者,随着故事发展,可适度加入图中人物的情绪变化,让文章内容更丰富、更具可看性。


构思方向

检视图片后,以描述文来解读图片内容,构思出以下剧情:

Grace身穿洋装、头戴帽子,手拿洋伞走在路上→一阵风把她的帽子吹走了,她拔腿狂追→她在公园看到她的帽子飘在空中。

故事结尾则是 Grace 发现那不是她的帽子,那个东西只是长得很像帽子的风筝罢了。


动动脑(Brainstorming

故事设定主 题  a kite

时 地  one summer afternoon, in the park

人 物  Grace, a boy who was flying a kite


写作大纲引导句  One summer afternoon, Grace was on her way home from having

tea with her friends.


发展句图一    Grace was walking down the street happily.

图二    She ran after her hat until she lost sight of it.

图三    She saw a kite which was similar to her hat.


结论  Grace realized that it was not her hat, but a kite in the shape of one.


范文

One summer afternoon, Grace was on her way home from having tea with her friends. While walking on the sidewalk, she flashed her radiant smile because she was still basking in her friends' compliments. They said she looked elegant in her outfit, which included a matching dress, hat, and parasol. Suddenly, a gust of wind blew her hat away. Grace chased after it, but it rose higher and higher. She kept running until she lost sight of it.


Exhausted and disappointed, Grace gave up and walked away in low spirits. When she was passing by a park near her home, she saw several kites flying high in the sky. One of them looked familiar, and Grace mistook it for her hat, so she approached the boy who was flying the kite and asked him to give it back. Snot was running down his face as he looked at her strangely. It turned out that it was not her hat. Instead, it was just a kite in the shape of a hat that was similar to the one she lost.



某个夏季的午后,葛莉丝和朋友茶叙后走在回家的路上。她走在人行道上,脸上洋溢着微笑,因为她仍沉浸在朋友们的赞美中,她们说她的洋装、帽子和洋伞等跟她很相配,整套衣服穿在她身上让她看起来很高雅。忽然,一阵风把她的帽子吹走了。葛莉丝追着帽子跑,但它愈飘愈高。她一直追到帽子飞离视线为止。


葛莉丝又累又沮丧,她放弃追帽子,心情低落地走开。她经过住家旁边的公园时,看见几个风筝在高空中遨翔。其中一个很眼熟,而葛莉丝把它误认是她的帽子,所以葛莉丝走近那个放风筝的男孩,要求他归还帽子。那个男孩奇怪地看着她,脸上还流着鼻涕。结果那根本不是她的帽子。那只是个帽子造型的风筝,跟她搞丢的帽子长得很像罢了。






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It's a Kite|追风筝的少女